***Post is a few days early because of the AWP conference.***
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Black Star in the Black Sky, I See You
And you see a
woman carrying another woman.
When they get to
where they are going
they put each
other down,
one at a time to
buy their goods.
An accordion,
no, a bagpipe’s open note plays
for all of us. It
plays an etude of blood storms,
of arms hugging
on for dear life.
You tell a man
without too much hair
that life has
not passed him by.
Life has passed
me by, and in the passing
I am left with a
cold strong wind soaring through me,
one that awakens
my black star diamond snake song.
Song that I
carry as you carry me.
For you, dear
star cherished everyone’s little song,
then with very
little effort, you wrote your own.
Down by the
river, we have such a song to sing.
And our song is
red with the fire of your nostrils.
And our song is
snakes blowing cold death’s cold wind.
Down by the
river, you build a kiln.
Down by the
river, you bake me in the clay oven.
I am ready and burst
out and walk down the street
and wave my hair
at the cabs.
No one ever
stops for me
so I am able to
walk my whole life.
Yes, I am always
walking.
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Black Star in
The Black Sky, How Can I Say Anything But Thank You?
We peer up into
the sky when life seems too short
or too long. We
wear our glasses to look.
We are pondering
our lives across some kind of sky valley
one that seems
so far but is indeed short and pondering.
Across a
shopping mall, we try to change each other into cars.
We see each
other as trees or smog or red poles.
We see each
other as major pains-in-the-ass.
But the black star
in the black sky is looking and while she is looking,
she is licking
her chops with her love song.
La-dee-da-da is her love song.
We sing her love
song as we drive toward one another in the parking lot.
We sing her old
songs and that magical door opens.
We need love because
I’m not saying love is kind.
I’m saying that
love is mercurial.
La-dee-da-da is her love song.
When it snows we
think the song is coming down to earth in a dot matrix.
The song
infiltrates and carries on to the cold river when all we wanted was dinner.
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Though she never
reaped what she sold,
she sometimes
laughed and bought the others coffee.
She who felt
glad for other women.
She who made me
think.
She had a light
that came out of her belly button
no matter how
they tried to suture it.
Though she sometimes
visited others it worked out
because when she
returned, she sang me their song.
Though her light
is off, all of us are waiting for her in the Volkswagen.
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Remember the
women who carried one another?
Now we don’t
carry.
Now we sit
ourselves down in the blustery forest.
Now we make a
fire and even when the wolves come we don’t retreat.
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For every
morning my beloved leaves,
It’s a small
leaving, but I get to feel being alone.
I get to feel
myself coming back but alone,
and without eyes
or a tongue.
Without eyes or
a tongue, I have nothing to see
and I have
nothing to say, but I have something to feel.
Without eyes or
tongue,
I don’t feel
misled by what I was seeking
and am no longer
tired by what has been leading me.
Now stripped of eyes
to see and tongue to talk,
alone, alone, I feel
the black quiet of the black sky.
Deborah:
I
wanted the poems in this collection to be organized around this young
woman’s coming of age tale, a very feminine/feminista white American
Jewish first-generation middle class lesbian bildungsroman. I worked and
worked on letting the self of the narrator, and letting the self of the
poems reveal themselves to me (for lack of a better phrase) as I worked
and worked and listened and listened to what the self, the narrator,
and what each poem had to tell me in the language it had to tell it to
me. This is tricky business, right? Because self–specifically, female,
Jewish, queer–any “non hegemonic” (also for lack of better phrase) self
identity is mitigated by the culture, society, and our own perceptions
of who we are–as are the white and middle-class and first world
identities of privilege that this narrator owns. And who’s to say what
the language of self sounds like. But for me, this young woman, like all
young woman also lives in this body, the kind that we all have, though
they are all so different, and body is the place where the memory and
self both live and express that self. In that way, the poems and the
narrator were telling me stories about what it meant to live in this/her
body, this/her cyst-feminine/lesbian/femme/feminista body that was
sometimes disembodied due to the trauma of simply having/living in a
feminine body within a patriarchal man-made world, and also living with
some very specific but not always specified trauma. And that literally
grounded the story–her body experience, the way she perceived the
world, her stutter, her weird elliptical reclamation of her voice
through her body experience. Some people call that healing. Ok, I’ll
call it that.
That’s all to say that the question of favorites is also tricky. The poems in the collection seem to need each other, like sisters in a very extended family. They do fine when they leave one another, but they do better together. What though, if I tell you that I am in love with the last cycle poem, “Black Star in the Black Sky” because it came to me in a fury, and that rarely happens, and because without being summative, the poem reaches (insufficiently, of course) for cosmic answers of being and aloneness, and all the body, race, queer, female voice questions that the collections seems concerned with? I like the cosmic-ness of that cycle poem, the way it uses seasons and astrology (also incorrectly and flawed), and the way it wants to reach toward love, but is scared and falls back on it self and laughs at it’s huge insufficiency. I like the texture of the poems, spacey and floating– a body in search of a body, like an astronaut who never lands.
Bio:
Deborah Schwartz is a poet and writer who teaches in the English Department at Bunker Hill Community College in Boston, MA. A Girl Could Disappear Like This (Kattywompus Press, March 2019) is her first collection of poetry.
https://kattywompuspress.com/shop/books-and-chapbooks/a-girl-could-disappear-like-this-full-length-by-deborah-schwartz/
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